Semester Reflection
"Upward and Onward""A1 Writing in English 1A"
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Examples of Essay #1 & #4
I am thoroughly proud of recieving an A on this essay, given it was my first that I wrote. I was very confident about my writing in this one, and felt like I deserved the grade I received. However, I did need more work on explaining my concepts and ideas further which took away the plus from the A I got. The topic was about "Why we write" which is one I could write about forever, which is why I felt like I connected more with what I was saying.
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My fourth essay wasn't bad, but I knew I could do better. I thought I brought the three articles of Fryer, Rodriguez, and Hurston successful enough for an A but it did need further explanation after I evaluated it for myself. I still think that a B+ is great for how I felt about this essay, since it did involve more connecting between themes, author's and ideas.
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